Sloppy Writing 101.16

Check out the sentences below for another word I overuse. -There were so many things now that fell into place. -I knew she had started smoking crack by the time I was eight, because there were a few times I remembered her being high. -Brooke, it’s freezing out there. – In one little handful of…
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The Writer’s Voice

May 17th was the start of the second round of The Writers Voice contest hosted by Krista, Cupid, Monica, and Brenda. TWV had 200 entries and I figured myself lucky just to get in. But then Cupid chose me to be on her team of ten + one alternate. What an honor. So this last…
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Sloppy Writing 101.15

Quick note: Thank you to Kelley Lynn for choosing me as one of her winners of the Oh Those High School Dances Blog Hop. I won best dressed, thanks to my metallic royal blue lamae dress. Check out her site for the other winners. For my prize, I got a book and I picked HUSHED…
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Sloppy Writing 101.14

Just a quick note. I was lucky to be one of the 200 entrants in The Writer’s Voice competiton hosted by to Krista, Cupid, Monica, and Brenda. This is my entry for FROSTY. The four ladies above picked 10 entries each, that they want to work with to prepare queries and first pages for the agents…
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The Writer’s Voice – #97 FROSTY

The Writer’s Voice Entry #97 Thank you to Krista, Cupid, Monica, and Brenda. Title: FROSTY Genre: Contemporary Young Adult Word Count: 52,000 words Query Sometimes you have to freeze everyone out to avoid getting burned. Sydney’s had seven foster families in seven years. Almost everybody in her life has let her down, including her crack…
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